I'm not a Harmony fan, but you manage a nice balance, not making her too vapid. Very in-line with S5 Angel.
> “You didn’t say anything about having money,” Jayne said, glaring at her. > “You didn’t ask,” Harmony shot back with a shrug.
*grins*
River and the leprechauns! :)
> And, of course, it would skew the entire universe as we know it, a paradigm shift, but those happen regularly anyway.”
*loves*
> “Oh, for crying out loud, will you put that thing down!” Harmony said, exasperated. “It won’t even kill me. I’ve gone vegetarian… well, sort of. I mean, I don’t drink vegetables or whatever, but ever since people started eating that processed gunk instead of actual food, the blood just tastes blech, you know? I drink animal blood now, usually horse or cow. It’s less plastic-y.”
*grins*
Just the sun of Earth-That-Was = neat trick. Though given Pylea it's certainly plausible.
> “Morally bankrupt, kind of evil, and just a little dumb,” she whispered with a smile as she watched them from her perch above the cargo hold. “They’re made for each other.”
This is great.
Your characterizations feel very true to the shows, and you've got such neat little details.
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Date: 2005-09-10 03:41 pm (UTC)> “You didn’t say anything about having money,” Jayne said, glaring at her.
> “You didn’t ask,” Harmony shot back with a shrug.
*grins*
River and the leprechauns! :)
> And, of course, it would skew the entire universe as we know it, a paradigm shift, but those happen regularly anyway.”
*loves*
> “Oh, for crying out loud, will you put that thing down!” Harmony said, exasperated. “It won’t even kill me. I’ve gone vegetarian… well, sort of. I mean, I don’t drink vegetables or whatever, but ever since people started eating that processed gunk instead of actual food, the blood just tastes blech, you know? I drink animal blood now, usually horse or cow. It’s less plastic-y.”
*grins*
Just the sun of Earth-That-Was = neat trick. Though given Pylea it's certainly plausible.
> “Morally bankrupt, kind of evil, and just a little dumb,” she whispered with a smile as she watched them from her perch above the cargo hold. “They’re made for each other.”
This is great.
Your characterizations feel very true to the shows,
and you've got such neat little details.